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Love story of a lover who exchanged his soul to return his loves life...
The next Sunday, I brought them homemade food and excited to see them. When I reached there, I saw someone new, not so familiar, and that was the first time I saw someone happy with those children because I was the only one who used to visit them. Those children were delighted because they got a new friend and that’s how I met her. (Innocent smile, cute face, talkative eyes, and her voice like a piece of music). We spend that day together with those children we played with them; we made them smile. We enjoyed ourselves a lot. Before leaving, one girl came to me and said, you guys are good together please always come together because today we felt like we got a family. Those words of her filled my heart with happiness, and before I could say anything, she said to that girl, that’s a promise, and then she looked at me, and she smiled. She said this is something we can do, right? (I was speechless).
The next Sunday, I was about to leave for the orphanage, and I got a call from her. She said we are organising a birthday party for them because nobody knows when they born so, I asked their caretaker if we could make them feel special, then they would be pleased, and the caretaker agreed for that. Further, she said, just think we are getting an opportunity to give them something extraordinary, and I think they will remember us for a lifetime for that. (I was so happy about that). We organized everything we ordered, exceptional food for them. We did everything any parents would do for their kids. Enjoying with those kids, I felt like I lived my life. We were watching them, and suddenly she said, I wish if I will get a partner who will understand this happiness and will treat them like a family. After some time everybody got so exhausted, and some of them fell asleep. One girl came to me and asked me, “Please let me sleep on your lap” I looked at her, and I got so emotional (That girl slept on my lap, and I was singing to that girl). Then she came to me and said, they like you so much don’t ever break their heart.
She asked me if you don’t mind, there’s something I want to confess to you. (I went into deep thinking and suddenly) she said I like you, you’re just perfect in every way, and you’re good with children, and you’re polite and lovable, and I know you would be an ideal partner for any girl and I want to marry you, "WILL YOU MARRY ME?" (She proposed to me). I was amazed because I never thought of something like that would come from her. I asked her to give me some time. Next week when we were going to meet in the orphanage, I planned a surprise for her. I was going to say yes, but I wanted to do that differently. When she came, some children showered flowers on her when she reached the gate some children gave her an album filled with her photos when she reached the garden a girl gave her a package and asked her to go to the other room where I was waiting for her. When she came, I asked her to open that package. She opened that package and found a ring in it. She looked at me and smiled (I could feel her happiness), and then we exchanged rings, and that's how we got engaged. In those all year’s first time, I saw those children that happy. We planned our wedding in the next month on Sunday in that orphanage only. But, being said, “HAPPINESS NEVER STAYS,” and the same thing happened with us. Our car crashed when we were on the way to the orphanage.
She asked me if you don’t mind, there’s something I want to confess to you. (I went into deep thinking and suddenly) she said I like you, you’re just perfect in every way, and you’re good with children, and you’re polite and lovable, and I know you would be an ideal partner for any girl and I want to marry you, "WILL YOU MARRY ME?" (She proposed to me). I was amazed because I never thought of something like that would come from her. I asked her to give me some time. Next week when we were going to meet in the orphanage, I planned a surprise for her. I was going to say yes, but I wanted to do that differently. When she came, some children showered flowers on her when she reached the gate some children gave her an album filled with her photos when she reached the garden a girl gave her a package and asked her to go to the other room where I was waiting for her. When she came, I asked her to open that package. She opened that package and found a ring in it. She looked at me and smiled (I could feel her happiness), and then we exchanged rings, and that's how we got engaged. In those all year’s first time, I saw those children that happy. We planned our wedding in the next month on Sunday in that orphanage only. But, being said, “HAPPINESS NEVER STAYS,” and the same thing happened with us. Our car crashed when we were on the way to the orphanage.
When I opened my eyes, I found myself in an extraordinary place. I felt like I was standing midair. No sky, no surface, there was nothing around but, that place crawled with people, and everybody was marching straight. I had no idea what was going on where I was, and suddenly I remembered about her. I searched for her everywhere, but I didn’t find her. I was marching to the unknown, and then I saw a big gate that appeared from nowhere. When I reached that gate, I noticed there were four doors on that gate with different colours and something written on that door,
The Red door (Servant’s hall)
The Yellow door (Administration fools)
The Black door (Death planner) and
The White door (Heavenly peace) and I was standing on the white door, and my door’s queue was comparatively small than those other three. When I went through that door, I saw a bright light, and that place was like a court. Someone was sitting up there at the top, and there was one person who was seated midair (I felt like that because I had no idea). My mind was still in shock. I had no idea what was going on. When I reached that man who was sitting down, and I asked him like a million questions, and he said son, please calm down. I will answer everything but, let me tell you about this place first and why and how you’re here. He said this is the spiritual world called “LI-DE,” a world of life and death, and you died when your car crashed, and you came here. That woman you are looking for she’s in the queue of the red door which leads to servant’s hall further he adds you were so high in the death world and your deeds were so good so, you came here at the white door (heavenly peace). Those who spent their life in envy, wrath, arrogance, and selfishness, they never got accepted by this door. You were above all expectations of the death world. And when the god of life and death got happy with those who were above the expectations, then he gives them an option to go back to your life or spend their life here like a king and believe me in my immortal life you’re the only third person whom he offered this. So, tell me what you want to do, do you want to go back or you want to spend your life in immortality. He was explaining everything but, I was only thinking about her.
I was about to tell him then suddenly I heard a powerful voice, and it was the god of “LI-DE.” He called me and asked me, son, tell me what you want. I can grant you anything about life and death. I thought about her, and I asked him, can I exchange my door with her whom I love the most, can I transfer my offerings to her can I exchange my soul for her life. Hearing those words, god went into deep thinking, and only the silence was there everywhere. After some time he said, son, this is the first time somebody asked me this, this is the first time somebody is willing to offer his soul for his love. Listen carefully I can grant you this but, you will lose this door permanently, you will get blacklisted from both worlds you will get stuck in between (Neither you can die or live). You will get posted on the black door, and believe me, that’s the worst from death. On that door, you will watch everyone, and you will plan end (DEATH) for them whoever will reach the death meter and believe me that work will kill you every day, and there’s no turning back, and you will get stuck there for an eternity. Without thinking more, I said yes, and I requested god to erase her memory of me because I don’t want to see her dying there. After all, she loves me so much, and I know she won’t be able to live peacefully if my memories stay with her.
God granted my wish, and he returned her life. I was watching her from the black door (Death planner), and like God said, that door was killing me but, seeing her happy that pain was nothing.
Highlights:
- The people who went through the red door will spend their life serving God till their next breath.
- The people who went through the yellow door will spend their life keeping the record for everything whatever is happening in the death world.
- The people who went through the black door will spend their life planning deaths for those who will reach death meter before their timeline.
- The people who went through the white door will spend their life living like a king of the spiritual world.
Written by: Chotisistories | Chiranjiv 💓
Love story of a lover who exchanged his soul to return his loves life...
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